diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
index 8d92daeb338..498ae3c0420 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
@@ -189,11 +189,11 @@
The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau
synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as
- ct in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged;
+ ct in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged;
The driver name has changed, but the network interface still
- has ct name.
+ has the ct name.
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@
The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports
IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged;
- A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
+ A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
from working has been fixed. &merged;Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;.
- The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver
+ The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver
has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down
the transmission rate. &merged;
@@ -485,8 +485,8 @@
&man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a option
to work on files instead of disk partitions.
- The bthidcontrol and the
- bthidd which support Bluetooth
+ The bthidcontrol command and the
+ bthidd command, which support Bluetooth
HID (Human Interface Device), have been added.The doscmd utility has been
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@
&man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98.The &man.find.1; now supports a option
- to locate files with &man.acl.3;
+ to locate files with &man.acl.3;.&man.indent.1; now supports a option
to control indentation of local variables. A number of other
@@ -602,17 +602,17 @@
role="package">net/nss_ldap) and groups with large
membership lists.
- The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD
+ The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD,
have been added. They also support a option
to extract values associated with the name list from the
specified core instead of the default /dev/kmem,
and a option to extract the name list from
the specified system instead of the default kernel.
- &man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility.
+ &man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved.
The changes include for a list of process IDs,
for a list of terminal names,
- which is equivalent with ,
+ which is equivalent to ,
for a list of group IDs,
which is the opposite of ,
and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;.
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
index 8d92daeb338..498ae3c0420 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
@@ -189,11 +189,11 @@
The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau
synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as
- ct in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged;
+ ct in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged;
The driver name has changed, but the network interface still
- has ct name.
+ has the ct name.
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@
The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports
IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged;
- A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
+ A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
from working has been fixed. &merged;Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;.
- The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver
+ The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver
has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down
the transmission rate. &merged;
@@ -485,8 +485,8 @@
&man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a option
to work on files instead of disk partitions.
- The bthidcontrol and the
- bthidd which support Bluetooth
+ The bthidcontrol command and the
+ bthidd command, which support Bluetooth
HID (Human Interface Device), have been added.The doscmd utility has been
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@
&man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98.The &man.find.1; now supports a option
- to locate files with &man.acl.3;
+ to locate files with &man.acl.3;.&man.indent.1; now supports a option
to control indentation of local variables. A number of other
@@ -602,17 +602,17 @@
role="package">net/nss_ldap) and groups with large
membership lists.
- The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD
+ The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD,
have been added. They also support a option
to extract values associated with the name list from the
specified core instead of the default /dev/kmem,
and a option to extract the name list from
the specified system instead of the default kernel.
- &man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility.
+ &man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved.
The changes include for a list of process IDs,
for a list of terminal names,
- which is equivalent with ,
+ which is equivalent to ,
for a list of group IDs,
which is the opposite of ,
and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;.